Moriah Leila

Hi there! I really enjoyed your poem, because you did a good job of finding ryhmes that fit the theme. I am terrible at this sort of thing. So bravo! ...

Woot Karsten! Congratulations my dear, you totally deserve it!

I love it! It not only makes me want to practice my pyschotic laughter, but it also makes me want to hit a pinata full of sugary goodness. My only ...

Jo impatiently paced the length of her father’s lodgings. It infuriated her that her father always locked her up right before they were to overtake a ship. How was she ...

Okay, well I said I would find something to critique, so I must keep my word. However, I am being seriously nitpicky here. First of all the scene with the ...

Ash pretty much summed it up. Your writing is beautiful, your descriptions vivid. But the problem is that you overwhelm us with purple prose. What is purple prose? Wikipeida defines ...

I am all caught up with reviews and seriously dying for more. Please people, there are only so many reviews I can do browsing the forums. It is so much ...

Hey Rosey, I happened upon this story and thought I might add my two cents. While I think your descriptions are wonderful and I can imagine myself alongside the characters, ...

We need at least three more people, don't you think? Oh well, I have some awesome ideas for a plot line. Let me know what you all think. Be honest. ...

Your book choices are really cool, although I haven't personally read any of them. I did watch the first of the Twilight movies, but haven't read the book yet. That ...

Welcome back! My name is Lisa, but you can call me Captain Cutthroat, or Cutthroat. Or whatever, I'm not picky. So you like to write prose? Me too, I actually ...

Hi there, my name is Lisa, but you can call me Captain Cutthroat, or Cutthroat. Whatever, I'm not hard to please. So, why don't you tell us a little about ...

It seems that Meadow covered all of the nitpicks that I saw, so I won't bore you with that. My only real critique would be to point out your characters. ...

The easiest pregnancy tests to read are digital ones and basically they will have a display that say "pregnant" or "not pregnant". I would say the next easiest to read ...

Honestly, I hate poetry. But I really like your poem. It was simple and to the point. I didn't have to figure out what you were talking about, which is ...